Rewriting today on chapter nine of book four during a tasty lunch of turkey bistro sandwich at Mud Street Cafe.

There was a long section of exposition that was getting dull to read, and today it became questions and answers among characters, which is automatically more interesting. It brings in their points-of-view.

And as a bonus, I added more information that makes the denouement in chapter 10 even more of a dangerous threat. (It wasn’t there before because chapters nine and ten were switched in order originally, as you may recall.)

Sometimes rewriting is just as important as writing.